Thursday, March 4, 2010

The Death Dealer by Thane

After watching Magnus create his poems and illustrate them, Thane wanted to get involved. He came up with most of this on his own. I helped with the word "thus".
This is his poem:

The dragon waits in his cave.
The water drips from the rocks.
He breathes a fire wave.
Death he thus gave.


Anonymous said...

Wow! This is a really great poem! I got a chill when I read it. The drawing is fabulous!

Anonymous said...

Great detail in the drawing. My 6yo son liked the dragon a lot.

Great job, Thane!